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30/1/2023

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January 30, 2023

First, an indulgence. Today is the first day in my life as a full time writer. No more squeezing desperate and sometimes frustrating moments out of the working/family/friends week to fervently create in patches of 10-45 minutes. Today I sit before my screen knowing that every working day hereafter the first priority and responsibility is to my craft. Honestly, I feel so elated, so freed, so weird!
 
The greatest challenge, now, will be self-discipline. No more school bells making me salivate and flinch, and move to the next class or task or activity or day. No more fretting over planning and marking in the evenings and on weekends to meet assessment deadlines or satisfy the needs of colleagues or students or parents. Instead, I am my task master. I decide what I will work on and when and how. And that becomes a very different form of self-discipline – like committing to regular gym or yoga or a diet to improve health.
 
Roald Dahl and many other writers have told us how important it is to establish routines as would be the case in any job. I am choosing to operate a working week from 9am-5pm. I have a sense of the working week daytime tasks that I must meet:

  • Planning
  • Thinking
  • Writing
  • Home duties (washing, tidying, eating, lawns etc)
  • Editing
  • Reading
  • Research
  • Learning
  • Marketing
  • Lunch
  • Blogging
and after work activities:
  • Family
  • Exercise (volleyball, gym, yoga, walks)
  • Socialising
  • Entertainment (films, plays)
 
And for the first time in so many years I can keep the former set from consuming the latter. Add to that mix once-off events like workshops, conferences and conventions to reconnect and stay in contact with writing peers and associations. Oh, and nanna naps – reflection time in the afternoons 
I have set up a specific workspace devoted to writing. I do have to remove a competing body each morning from the writer’s chair, but the seat is warm when I begin my working day. I’m reconnecting with professional associations and networks – Australian Society of Authors, Writers SA, Science Fiction Australia – and there will be others. I have locked in the weekly blog (yes, it will be weekly hereafter) for Monday morning to start the writing week and to commit me to the task. By the way, this is the 78th blog entry since I started this process back in 2018. I never realised I had made so many. The blog, as a project, represents 38,000+ words. Maybe it will be its own book sometimes…maybe.

​Now, to the task. Thank you everyone who engaged in the conversation around fantasy novels and maps and language appendices. The consensus is that they are indeed useful and interesting. So, for the current 
The Last Wizard project, I will include them. I completed six maps that are relevant across the four books 
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– not all six will appear in every book. While they are colour in the attached image, they will inevitably be black and white in the final books.

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Today I begin the significant task of editing The Last Wizard series. Well, I’m actually editing books three and four. I re-read books one and two last week to reacquaint myself with the development towards books three and four. Book one is being kept in its original state as it was substantially edited before publication. Book two has been through first, second and third edits. However, books three and four are going into third edit today. Third edit involves looking for and adjusting:
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  • Remaining typos and errors
  • Plot arc
  • Character consistencies, especially emotional traits
  • Social/community details
  • Travel, time anomalies
  • Connections with previous and following books
 
and a host of other things. Third edit is when I prepare a manuscript for beta reading.
 
Enough. I’m also setting a time limit for writing each weekly blog. Time’s up. Time to edit.
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January 8, 2023

8/1/2023

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Mapping it out...

​Thursday, I finished the first rough draft of Harmi's Song - The Last Wizard Book 4. The editing process begins this coming week.

Creating a fantasy story entails creating a rich world in which the characters can play out their lives. The original The Last Wizard (1995) was based in a pseudo-Nordic coastal environment in a village called Harbin nestled beneath Dragon Mountain. All the village culture and history aside, I created a map of Harbin to visually position events (maps below).
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I labelled the significant places in the final version, and in the print edition the colours were transformed to a black and white rendition. Harbin became a place.
 
For fantasy writers, geography and an understanding of how geographical formations and features co-exist and affect each other to create a specific ecosystem of plants, birds, animals, becomes an essential tool bag of knowledge and skills when designing a place or a world.

The expansion of The Last Wizard into four distinct books where the central characters are drawn by necessity and circumstance into a much larger world than their original village has necessitated more map building. The value of maps for me include:
  • understanding and utilising geographical spaces and names in the story
  • ensuring travel distances and time are logical and consistent
  • flagging cultural norms and changes for the readers as well as the characters
  • providing physical challenges and refuges for characters
  • adding 'reality' through 'suspension of disbelief' for readers
​The first draft maps I generated to show Chasse and Jaysin's and eventually everyones' journeys from the remote village of Harbin to the centre of the Kermakk Empire where multiple kingdoms and nations are drawn into a single cosmopolitan city were partly generated on my computer - a mixture of hand-drawn outlines and digital fonts: visually nice, but, for me, lacking a rustic authenticity I wanted to associate with these fantasy societies. I also wanted to give the 'mapmaker' a personality which the computer assisted mapping didn't provide. So, I have resorted to hand-drawn maps and deliberately rough lettering, partly to suggest the maker of these maps is not a professional nor a member of any royal court with practised skills in mapping, but someone who is trying to make sense of the world.
 
I was hoping to show a couple of finished versions from today (see draft in larger photo), but I have yet to add in details so I will hold those off until next week.
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All the while that I was deciding on my approach, I was nagged by the thought that my stories don't really need to bother with including maps, especially rudimentary ones. Places are named and described, and the stories detail distances and times spent travelling and the destinations. Readers can imagine. The maps are superfluous. It's an interesting dilemma. Are maps in fantasy novels merely an unnecessary genre trope? What do you think?

For now, I'll complete the maps for these stories this week before I begin the much more demanding task of editing. If nothing else, it's a therapeutic exercise.
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January 2, 2023

2/1/2023

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Fresh beginnings...

It's been a long haul between the last post and this one - not just three months. Reflecting on 2022 made me realise just how nasty the year was on personal levels, although there were plenty of good things too. BUt one change is in place - I begin 2023 as a full time writer!

For the record, my lack of recent posts is due to several matters:
  • ending a long career
  • setting up workplace resources for my successors and colleagues for 2023
  • having an emergency gall bladder operation
So, 2022 - glad you are done.

The current project - Harmi's Song: Book 4 of The Last Wizard series - is one chapter from draft completion and currently sitting at 89,000 words. I planned to have this one done before Christmas, but see the list above as to why it took longer.

Having built toward the final confrontation between our heroes and the antagonist, I'm currently crafting how that confrontation unfolds amid an epic but fundamentally one-sided battle. Overwhelming outnumbered in a battle that doesn't make much sense to my protagonist - a dragon caught in human warfare - the antagonist is determined to 'rule the world' and ignore the rights of others - think Putin and the like - and while our dragon is keen to protect her immediate human family she struggles with the human need for power at whatever cost to other humans. I can't say more - spoiler otherwise.

The Last Wizard series across four books will represent around 360,000 words of creativity when finished. The next steps are to:
  • complete the final chapter draft or denouement for our characters
  • work through drafts of book two, three and four to check for consistency/continuity
  • edit book four in the usual first draft manner
  • decide whether to add a language guide at the end of the books where appropriate
  • improve/update maps
I'm estimating as a full time writer I can go through these steps and be ready to approach publishers by March/April with the proposals. Guess I'm about to find out the efficiency difference between cramming writing tasks between full time employment and other life matters, as I've always done, and the 'employment' actually being writing.

One target is to increase the frequency of blog posts as personal discipline for each week of writing. There. It's in black and white. You guys can hold me to it. I will make Sunday evening the time for writing reflection each week.

​Happy new year. Let 2023 be a healthy, productive and satisfying year for you all. We're underway!
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